Elegy for a Love Still Breathing

Abstract

Within this poem, I wanted to explore the nuance within Achilles and Patroclus’ dynamic, taking a romantic interpretation of their relationship. After reading the Iliad by Homer, I have been fascinated by the ways in which these characters contrast each other; though both men are powerful fighters, Homer pays particular attention to Patroclus' kindness and often presents him as Achilles’ narrative foil. I was interested in exploring why a character such as Patroclus, who is depicted by his gentleness, would choose to remain by the side of somebody as prideful and aggressive as Achilles. This is something which other authors have previously presented in many different ways. For example, Madeline Miller’s novel The Song of Achilles (2011) presents Patroclus as a gentle individual who dislikes fighting, though within my own poem I wanted to acknowledge Patroclus’ capacity for violence when war necessitates that he kills enemy soldiers. Therefore, I experimented with the idea that Patroclus’ resentment at Achilles’ actions might manifest itself in the form of violent desires despite his great loyalty to, and love for, Achilles. To explore this conflict and bittersweet love within their relationship, I used the stereotypically romantic form of the sonnet. Furthermore, Patroclus’ sense of infatuation begins and ends the poem, as I wanted to highlight his tragic entrapment within his feelings for Achilles.